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You're Not a Monster by Bactatanker You're Not a Monster by Bactatanker
This story simply blew me away. It is just fantastic, and that's all I have to say. Pen stroke wrote a quality fanfic like it was a novel or something.

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Tyraka628 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What's the name of this story, anyway? If it's as good as everyone claims, I'll want to read it myself!
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LordGodsServant Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
"Past Sins"
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Tyraka628 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I posted this years ago. I've already read Past Sins and many of its spinoffs.
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FBGMadjutant Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
*by
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:iconfbgmadjutant:
FBGMadjutant Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
*fan fic
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FBGMadjutant Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
pasts sins was a wonderful gan fic, my favorite bt far
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is the perfect fic for anyone to read. But as far as favorites, I fell head over hooves for the Fallout Eq fic. Still, recovering from two months of no sleep.

oh, and I already mention the Penstroke in the description, and provided the eqd link. so I think I'm covered.
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Nbbren Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
cute pic!!!!!!
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Outsidethesphere Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Nice job!
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thankyou!
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Bronyboy Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
AW ! Nyx is best pony!
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TheTinyInuMason Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
So..... cute..... HNNNNNNNNGGGGG *Diabetes Get!*
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:iconbactatanker:
Bactatanker Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Crap! why do I keep hurting everypony?! WHYYYY?
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TheTinyInuMason Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011
Just.... too..... cute.... And now I am the dead, blegh.
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K4nK4n Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
Aww, so cute... Nyx isn't a monster, she just made the wrong choice.
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tdlob Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
I still honestly don't know how to feel about Nyx....
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is only the dedication behind the character in the story that hooked me.
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tdlob Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
Hrmmm... I don;t read a lot of pony fan fics.... Perhaps when I get a free moment I will give this a look see.
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't normally read fics either. But this one is novel quality, and contains no trace of shipping. A true gem.
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tdlob Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
Wait... isn't Nyx supposed to be the demon spawn of Twilight/Nightmare Moon?

That idea alone is likely the reason I don't know how to feel about Nyx... not a big fan of the shipping that takes place in this community. :/
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, yes, she does come from nightgmare, but that is the whole point, and I enjoyed it. But as I said this DOESN'T contain shipping, so don't worry about that. Just read the first few chapters, and you should know if you like nyx or not.
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tdlob Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
Fine.... when I get some free time I'll give it a look see and let you know how I feel about Nyx.
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KatWolfKid Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWW. THATS ADORABLE!
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3
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WanderSong Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
Awww! That's so sweet! :heart:
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you enjoy it!
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WanderSong Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
:aww:
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Clixx Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
HNNNNNNNNNNNGG
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is that a cringe or a sqee?
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Clixx Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
More like I cannot contain the urge of sqee since the CUTENESS IS OVAR 9000... Why does Nyx have to be so adorable?!
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't have the answer, but glad to provide more of a need for it :)
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tdlob Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
I think HNNNNNG is generally good...

I have seen it used as a death from cuteness overload and such...
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sounds good. I just haven't seen it before.
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tdlob Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
Happy to be of service. :D
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Sheamus-MLP Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011   Artisan Crafter
So Cute
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You!
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Sheamus-MLP Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011   Artisan Crafter
Your Welcome :iconmeowdanceplz:
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YourBigBrony Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
So adorable :aww:
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A stick figure Nyx would be adorable as well. She can't not be. Thanks!
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TheTinyInuMason Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
Think you could add her cutie mark? Or are you avoiding spoiling anything?
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That, and this is based when Nyx was younger, like the day after she was created.
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MagicaITrevor Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
8D Epic job... Twi's mane looks a bit short/disheveled, but that's not what the picture is about. Its about Nyx, and she's COMPLETELY Adawwable, so you did your job! :iconlunasaluteplz::iconsishoof:
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight's mane looks short because it wraps the other way around her neck. the flash in the show tends to ignore that.
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MagicaITrevor Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
XD Yeah, that occurred to me after I typed that! XD
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Nimbose Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Loved the story, love this picture. <3
It's nice to see other fans! ;v;
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You! Not completely sure what you mean about the fan part though, this story has a very large following.
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Nimbose Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, it's just I haven't come across many fans because I'm not really involved with the MLP community.. xD
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That makes sense.
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Tyruas Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Loved this fic so much, finished it last night.... <3

Amazing, I cried like evey chapter pretty much, laughed, yeah.... it's just great.
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Bactatanker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hear ya! I was never forced to tears, but I was captivated for sure.
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